Nasili Profile Reflection

Write about my story

t was 1996 Me and my Friends Went on a trip.I was thinking we should go overseas to papua nugini  But we had no money for an airplane ticket so we did it the old Fashion way.We had to get on a boat.Lucky my friends dad owned a ship because he was a sailor but he considered being a pirate.After a few days we packed our luggage and went overseas.During the way we saw alot of whales splashing our boat.At night we packed our sleeping bags so we took them out and set them up.At 3:45 in the morning I heard a bump all of my friends woke up and my friends dad was shocked because he was awake all night and he said it was like a dinosaur and shark mixed up i was confused because i thought he was watching too many movies but he was telling the truth it jumped up and one of my friends said it was the loch ness i did not know what was that but our boat was still floating.My Friend showed me a picture and I was terrified because it was massive.During after at sunset i heard i bump but louder there was a crack on the side and our boat sinking slowly it was the of all of us.

This is my writing my teacher casted a picture we had to write a story.

we wrote a story an it was interesting and fun

i told my story and i liked it but i have to fix it.